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Crying In The Rain... by ~KRYSTALLIZED:iconKRYSTALLIZED:



Im barely holding on,
Nothing to forget my pain.
No one hears me,
While im crying in the rain.

I cant tell the difference
Between the rain drops and my tears.
I hope no one else notices,
I want no one to know my fears.

I smile when im unhappy,
I hide when i feel alone.
In my room, i cry myself to sleep,
I cry when im on my own.

My hurt is building,
One day, ill let it all go.
Til then ill cry alone everynight,
I wont let anyone know.
©2005-2009 ~KRYSTALLIZED
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Author's Comments

This is a poem i wrote while i was seriously depressed, hurt and alone.
I scared of what i might do to myself so instead i wrote this. and it might not make sense coz i couldnt see coz i was crying too much lol

enjoy!

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:iconmelonhead118:
y'kno.. i can understand this quite well.. its quite a beautiful poem, even though it is about feeling hurt.. :hug:

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:iconzeroknight:
its simply brilliant

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:iconbrad666:
wow this is a really really good poem, it just flows so nicely and i can relate to it 2

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:iconsweetheart18:
very good poem. you definitely captured the feeling perfectly. i know the feeling.

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:iconlost-and-crying:
Yep.....captures the feeling like a photograph.

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:iconkrystallized:
thank you, kinda went for that feeling

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